One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is how to be good member os society.Teaching children to be one of the good member of our society has become an essential part of our life

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is how to be
good
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a good
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member
os
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of
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society
.Teaching
children
to be one of the good
member
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members
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of our
society
has become an essential part of our life.
However
, there is no absolute agreement on whether
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behavior
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behaviour
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of
children
in
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society
should be taught by
parents
or school. A commonly held belief that
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becoming
great
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part of
the
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society
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on
parents
and should be taught by them.As evidence of
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they point to carrying
main
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part of their education and giving
right
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advices
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of
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life.
Furthermore
,
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it is
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natural for
children
to copy and act like their
parents
.It could be explained by the
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fact
thats
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that
not enough to just tell and teach how they actually should do
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because
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the
parents
are live
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who
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of each experience. As
result
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, it leads to
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defining
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which road they'll
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and which way they'll act in
society
.
On the other hand
, some people claim that school is the place where
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children
have to
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how to be good
member
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members
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of
society
.
For example
, they may mention that in
the
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class that
full
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of
diffrent
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different
kids they'll naturally understand how to act.
In addition
,
practical
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way of learning is always better than
theoretical
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study.The explanation lies
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fact that in school
children
are separate from
parents
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their parents
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or
an
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adults which means
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independent
, so they learn to make a friend, develop
diffrent
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different
characteristics and
to
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protect
own
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their own
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rights.
Therefore
children
grow up by forming
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personality
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that is
unic
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unique
. In
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conclusion
cnclusion
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conclusion
, taking everything mentioned into account
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would argue that by forming new
personality
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personalities
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and teaching them how to be good members of
society
the golden middle should be considered and never forgo
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