The bar chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the comparison of five Australian cities about the
habit
of citizens purchasing Fix the agreement mistake
habits
coffee
or tea.
Overall
, it can be seen that Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart have an increased variation. Brisban and Adelaide have a fluctuation in purchasing.
To begin
with, the Sydney 40 per cent
of people
bought fresh coffee
and
40% of instance packed and 60 per Correct word choice
apply
cent
went to cafe
to brink Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
both
. Moreover
, Melbourne has 95 per cent
of humans who brought both
fresh and instant coffee
, as well as
, 62 % of people
go to cafes for both
.
On the other hand
, Brisban has the least contribution of purchase in fresh items. Furthermore
, it has the same rate of people
for both
instant coffee
and people
who went to cafes. In addition
, Adelaide has the least purchase of fresh items, along with
it having the highest contribution in instant coffee
. However
, Hobart reached a peak in people
who went to cafes, as well as
, 90 per cent
of humans brought coffee
in the last
four weeks.Submitted by fazilharis20 on
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