IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line chart depicts the electric appliance ownership changes and time spent on housework in households between 1920 and 2019.

Overall

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, it can be seen that there are three electric appliances. Vacuum cleaner and Refrigerator has an upward trend and Washing machine has a fluctuating trend .

To begin

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with, the Washing machine had 40 per

cent

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of households in 1920 and reached 70 per

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of people utilising them in 1960.

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, it fell in 1980 and managed to rise in 2000.

In addition

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, the Refrigerator has a rise in variation. It reached a peak during 1980 and remains equal till the era.

Furthermore

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, vacuum cleaner has 30 per

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of people used them in 1920.

However

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, it has an increased variation and reached a peak in 2000. Despite ,

this

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the hours spent on housing

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50 per

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during 1920, but it got a dramatic fall trend during the period.

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, it has only 10 per

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of working hours in 2019.