Music play an important role in society, others think it is simply a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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plays a big role in our daily lives.

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many hold

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belief, others believe it only serves as a recreational tool.

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essay will demonstrate the arguments behind these two opinions,

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think

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has greater importance than just

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. A reason to think that

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is simply for

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is the fact that it has mostly ever been used for the sake of recreational activities. In short,

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has never been

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as contributing much aside from intangible values like improving moods, which belongs under

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. It is used predominantly in celebrations, concerts and video games. As

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,

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music

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is valuable, its worth is superficial only.

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,

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gives much more than that. First and foremost,

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has contributed plentily in terms of history. Even in

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of ancient civilizations,

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remained and was discovered in

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of instrument relics. These give glimmers of insights into the culture and social habits of the people at that time.

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,

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has been confirmed to do much more than simply

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moods. Many researches confirmed that certain tunes can affect a person's capacity to concentrate.

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, video games like Legend of Zelda, utilized

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aspect of

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to create melodies in their game that immerses the players. Not only the ability to focus, songs with certain beats can be utilized to lull people to sleep by mimicking slow heartbeats. In conclusion, it is

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my personal opinion that

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is and has always been a tool much more powerful than its

entertainment

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values. Many of its psychological effects are being studied

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, and it will have only become more relevant by the next twenty years

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the importance of mental health.