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Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.

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Across the globe, people will learn a lot of things in their hearts from parents, teachers and society.One segment of people believe that individual learns many things from their own
experience
 as it plays the role of the best mentor
instead
 of the institution or tertiary
activity
 and it is first-hand knowledge.
However
, other segments of people think that learning at school gives more lessons of
activity
 than soul experiences. In my opinion, I totally agree that everyday learning is a great weapon that makes us bold and allows us to face the harsh reality of growth with a smile. On the one hand, it is a practical skill
that is
 learned by anyone through his or her
activity
while
 performing any
activity
 in their soul.
Such
 as a man who lost his or her one parent in his
life
 comes to know real-
life
experience
 by doing
such
 work which he had not learned from any book or from school but
life
 teaches him every day when he puts himself in that path.
Hence
, growth teaches us big lessons in
life
.
On the other hand
,
life
-long
experience
 is given to a guy by the
life
 which he or she cannot gain from bookish knowledge or from other's
activity
 realities because it is theoretical for an individual who is learning the book
however
, it will become
experience
 when a folk has to face it.
Therefore
, college knowledge is just a boat without riddles but real reality is something else that
life
 shows you.
To conclude
,
life
 is a real mentor than acquired from other places
such
 as from the library or from colleges. In my opinion,
life
's struggle gives
such
 a lesson about which nobody thought about it before and it will remain with that body throughout his soul till death.
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