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Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.

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Across the globe, people will learn a lot of things in their hearts from parents, teachers and society.One segment of people believe that individual learns many things from their own
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 as it plays the role of the best mentor
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 of the institution or tertiary
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 and it is first-hand knowledge.
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, other segments of people think that learning at school gives more lessons of
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 than soul experiences. In my opinion, I totally agree that everyday learning is a great weapon that makes us bold and allows us to face the harsh reality of growth with a smile. On the one hand, it is a practical skill
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 learned by anyone through his or her
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 performing any
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 in their soul.
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 as a man who lost his or her one parent in his
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 comes to know real-
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experience
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 by doing
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 work which he had not learned from any book or from school but
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 teaches him every day when he puts himself in that path.
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, growth teaches us big lessons in
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.
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,
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-long
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 is given to a guy by the
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 which he or she cannot gain from bookish knowledge or from other's
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 realities because it is theoretical for an individual who is learning the book
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, it will become
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 when a folk has to face it.
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, college knowledge is just a boat without riddles but real reality is something else that
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 shows you.
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,
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 is a real mentor than acquired from other places
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 as from the library or from colleges. In my opinion,
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's struggle gives
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 a lesson about which nobody thought about it before and it will remain with that body throughout his soul till death.
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