The supplied map gives data on the developments that were at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005

The supplied map gives data on the developments that were at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005
The map depicts data on the seaside hotel of Templeton development between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that major development of the city has been done in the southwest
part
.
In addition
, the southeast
part
also
has developed a lot.
To begin
with, the northeast
part
had many trees during 1990, but it was removed and renovated into buildings and houses in 2005.
Moreover
, the northwest area remains almost unchanged
,
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but introduced an airport and numerous houses.
In addition
, the ways of the road are well connected in the north and parking has enlarged.
On the other hand
, the southeast
part
had only plants and empty land in 1990, but later refurbished the land and introduced factories and ferries in 2005.
However
, the railway station remains unchanged,
as well as
, it enlarged the train routes all over the city. Despite
this
, the southwest area consisted of plants and trees in 1990
,
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but brought changes and developed many buildings and supermarkets.
Furthermore
, the roadways and railways are well connected.
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