Most people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why do you think could this be? Should Government provide more financial support to the industries?

Films

are being produced all over the world throughout the year. Many people suggest that

their

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preferences

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to watch a

film

,

which

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that

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is produced by a foreign

film maker

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film-maker

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rather than

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their money to watch a locally produced movie. I agree with

this

notion. There are several reasons

to

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this

preference. One of them is the late rise of

local

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firm industry. There were always movies being produced by our native producers but they were not advertised sufficiently in our country.

Whereas

foreign

films

are marketed globally.

Consequently

,

this

is the reason

of

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the large revenue they managed to generate from

this

profession. Local producers need to broaden their

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and invest in the publicity of their work.

This

will help

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a huge audience to watch our native actors and actresses on the big screen. Another reason

of

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the local

films

lagging behind is the limited funds.

Government

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The government

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should give financial support to

the

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apply

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local firms

industries

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and industries

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. In

this

way,

film

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industry can generate an income for the country. Concurrently,

films

shot in the mountain ranges can attract tourists to the country.

As a result

, tourism can be ameliorated in the homeland which will

also

profit

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benefit

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the authorities.

To conclude

, in order to make the local firm working

local

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in local

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film making

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film-making

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industries a success everyone has to play a part. Filmmakers need to make better

films

and market them on a larger scale. Governments need to fund the industries.

As a

consequence

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people might start preferring local

films

over foreign

films

.