The charts show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.
The pie chart
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
expenditure
and income on food
and clothes
per family in the UK.
Overall
, it is clear from the pie charts that the higher expenditure
was on meat, fish, fruit and vegetables between 2010 and 2013. As far as the table, there was little change in both years (2010 and 2013).
To begin
with, the average income in the UK was 29000 in 2010, while
in 2013 this
figure decreased to 25000.Spending on food
and clothes
accounted for 14000 in 2010, whereas
in 2013 this
figure increased to 15000.
As far as pictures, in 2010 the expenditure
on fruit and vegetables accounted for 26% which is two times higher than the expenditure
on clothes
in 2013, however
, the figures for other food
was 18% and it was still unchanged in 2013. Furthermore
, in 2013 the figures for food
and vegetables was 30% which is also
two times bigger than clothes
in 2010.In addition
to this
, daily products accounted for only 12% in 2010, whereas
in 2013 this
figure jumped to 16%.Finally
, meat and fish in 2010 and 2013 accounted for 29% and 23% respectively.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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