The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts depict information about the key reasons for tourists arriving in Orange City in 2006 and 2016.
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, a significant amount of visitors came to the country for annual events in both years Linking Words
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the popularity of restaurants increased massively in 2016.
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According to
the observations, the highest Linking Words
proportion
of tourists (nearly half of the visitors) visited the country in 2006 for annual events at 45% followed by museum visits at 27%The restaurants and Use synonyms
the
other reasons recorded the lowest Correct article usage
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proportion
at 10% and 5% respectively
When considering the year 2016, nearly half of the foreigners visited the country for restaurants (41%) which was 4 times higher than the figures in 2006. , Use synonyms
However
, the recorded amount for museums saw a considerable drop from 27% in 2006 to only 11% in 2016. The second highest Linking Words
proportion
of tourists in 2016 was recorded for annual events at 32% Use synonyms
while
a similar Linking Words
proportion
accounted for theatre and other reasons at 8%.Use synonyms
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