The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.
The diagram illustrates how the Monarch butterfly came to life.
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, the life cycle of
this
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type of butterfly has four main stages: egg , larval, pupal and adult stages. At the beginning of the first
stage
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, eggs are laid on the milkweed,
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after 14 days the second
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starts,
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known as the larval
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because the
larva
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starts to form. Notably, there is the creation of a newly hatched
larva
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and
subsequently
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, the caterpillar starts to walk on the milkway and
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there is the attachment of the
larva
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. Following that, there is the third
stage
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in which from the
larva
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attachment there is the formation of a chrysalis after 10 days. From there it emerges as an adult butterfly and after growing enough it migrates to the south at first. After six months, during his
last
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stage
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, the butterfly migrates to the north.
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, it mates with another butterfly and lays the egg again on the milkweed and in
this
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way, it starts another life cycle process of a Monarch butterfly.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words stage, larva with synonyms.
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