The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map below illustrates three different places for an entertainment centre.
It is clear that
each part of them is located in different places such
as B is in the middle of the map, C is the west of the B and A is in the southeast of the A.
We can see that place
C is surrounded by lots of trees that makes spectacular view for people who want to enjoy the rest of their time. Also
Add a comma
,Also
this
place
is far away from polluted areas and noisy places.
Place
B which is the centre of the map contain three high-rise buildings that it is a good area for individuals who need modern facilities. In addition
, this
location is close to the river. The leisure centre is place
A which is an industrial area and also
is located near to the river. This
place
is the best situation for the population who like industrial areas and would like to work in a factory and be an internship
.Replace the word
intern
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