During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a bussinessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this bussinessman. In your letter • remind him when and where you met • tell him what kind of job you are interested in • say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention towards a statement that you have made about offering a job in one of your places.
Firstly
, I want to remind you that we met each other on 6th July at Chicago Airport.
Also
, I was sitting right next to you on seat number B03.
Secondly
, you told me a lot about your business. You said that you have
plethora
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of restaurants and you advised me to take a place in one of them.
Additionally
, you mentioned that I have to contact you directly about
this
situation.
Thirdly
, I am really into cooking. So,
that is
why I want to be a cook at your Turkish restaurant. I highly recommend you
to
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choose me ,
due to
my knowledge of cooking skills. I worked as a chef at a restaurant called Canada a year ago. I left my position because of my studies. Now I have graduated
the
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University of California and my major
was
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engineering .
However
, I am not interested in
this
job. So, I decided to be
food
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preparer. I can say that I am
master
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at cooking. My previous manager said all good
thing
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about me. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Mohinur
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grammar
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content
Consider elaborating more on your relevant experience and skills to strengthen your suitability for the job.
tone
The letter opens and closes with polite and appropriate greetings, maintaining a suitable tone throughout.
task achievement
The main points are clearly addressed, including where and when you met, the job you're interested in, and why you're suitable for the job.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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