The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
Given diagram demonstrates the life cycle of the
salmon
. Use synonyms
Overall
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salmon
have an average lifespan of nine years and their life cycle consists of four main stages: egg, fry, smolt and adult. Use synonyms
While
in the first three ,stages Linking Words
salmon
live in freshwater, in the Use synonyms
last
stage they are placed in saline water.
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To begin
with, the Linking Words
salmon
eggs hatch in approximately 3 months, Use synonyms
then
develop into alevin which generally feeds on their yolk sac at Linking Words
this
moment and they typically maintain Linking Words
this
form for several weeks. Linking Words
Next,
when the fish grow to 5 to 10 weeks, they are capable of swimming and are called Fry at Linking Words
this
stage.Linking Words
Further
, the Linking Words
salmon
starts to mature and some finger markings start to show.
Afterwards, when it comes to 1 to 3 years old, they begin to group and head out to the sea. Use synonyms
Finally
, when they stay in the ocean for 1 to 8 years, they are viewed as adult Linking Words
salmon
. Eventually, they mate and spawn. Use synonyms
However
, after giving birth to their eggs, they will die within 2 weeks.Linking Words
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