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In many developing countries, there is a problem of declining quality of air and water. What are the causes for this and what measures could be taken to prevent this?

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Most of the developing nations in the world are facing environmental crises.
Due to
this
, the problem of air and
water
 pollution has become prominent in
such
 countries.
Further
, a lower literacy rate and insufficient funding from the government are adding to the main cause. The following paragraphs will offer some measures to cope with the above-mentioned
issue
. 
To begin
 with, underdeveloped nations become incapable of providing basic education to their youth, which leads to the complication of rampant population, it
further
 creates the problem of traffic jams and air pollution. Not only
this
,
in
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but in
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 these countries government is often stuck in high debt and never capable enough to provide funding to the remote areas in order to treat the dirty
waste
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wastewater
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water
, States like UP and Bihar have 40% of residents drinking
such
 untreated
water
. As a solution to the above-mentioned
issue
,
people
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the people
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 of the nation have to come together collectively to work alongside each other, private and public bodies are required to work consistently to make their nation a better place to live in.
Therefore
, on internet platforms volunteers can organize public funding to tackle
such
 problems happening around them, and local issues should be shown nationwide to collect more donations.
In addition
, educational campaigns should be organised especially in backward areas to educate the citizens about one-child benefits
along with
 teaching them about treating polluted
water
 in households . In conclusion, the growing
issue
 of polluted air and
water
 in poor nations needs to be confronted with the help of the government
as well as
 individuals by increasing the funding amount to be used in the aid of the population suffering through the
issue
.
Along with
 it, the focus should
also
 be made on educating the people living in poor conditions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rapid industrialization
  • emission
  • pollutants
  • greenhouse gases
  • urbanization
  • population growth
  • environmental regulations
  • enforcement
  • agricultural runoffs
  • renewable energy sources
  • waste management
  • public awareness
  • ecosystems
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