The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the fuel cost. Do you agree or disagree?

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of

fuel

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is the best way to handle the environmental problem.

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, I think

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solution is not effective and there are other practical ways to solve

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issue. Increasing

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costs not only has low feasibility

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negatively impacts society. First of all, raising petrol costs does not help to solve the problem because the demand of humans for commuting to work or to school is still high.

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, even if the government increases the

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price, the number of vehicles on the streets still does not decrease, leading to no reduction in exhaust fumes emitted into the atmosphere.

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, raising the

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cost

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influences people’s lives.

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plays a crucial role in the manufacturing process, so if factories must spend more money on

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, it requires them to increase the final

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of the product.

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, the rise in the price of

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leads to the

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of many items increasing, so it puts economic pressure on residents. There are many other solutions that can help to tackle environmental problems. One of the most effective ways to reduce gas

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is that encourage people to use public

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to replace motorbikes and cars. To do that,

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to raising the awareness of people about the positive impact of public

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on the environment, the government

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should enhance the standard of the public

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system

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as widening the routes, improving seat quality and ensuring punctuality.

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people will prefer to travel by public

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, which helps to reduce a significant amount of

emissions

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into the air.

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, most of the

emissions

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come from industrial activities, so those wastes need to be treated carefully before being released into the environment. The government should strictly punish the factories that discharge untreated

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into the environment. In conclusion, increasing

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costs not only is inefficient

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environmental problems

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causes negative impacts on populations.

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, I think some solutions like using public

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and strictly

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managing

factory

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are more effective.