In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negatives effects on society?

Hello, my name is Arman Effendi. I'm 22 and I'm from Indonesia. Recently, I finished my studies in Applied Meteorology and now I work at FWI or Forest Watch Indonesia as a GIS specialist Now, I want to talk about the theme that I chose. I choose leadership because I think my leadership skills are very improved in my college period. I became the head of administration and data research in my second year and the head of program management and research in my third year as a Senior Resident. As I know, Senior Residents are one of the organizations that manage new students on campus, especially at Bogor Agricultural University. I met many new people who helped me to achieve the goal that we set together. I really learned a lot in
this
organization
and I felt my leadership was sharply increased compared to Senior High School. The problem I often encounter when being a leader is not responsible for the job.
This
is very disruptive to the sustainability of an
organization
because it can hinder an
organization
's progress. We often find
this
phenomenon
due to
a lack of self-awareness of how importance of the role of members in the
organization
.
This
thing must addressed as soon as possible so that the
organization
can develop without any obstacles. The solution that should be the duty of each is to raise awareness of the importance of carrying out the tasks assigned. We can learn from Japan in
this
regard. Everyone will feel very guilty if they can't do what they are supposed to do.
In addition
, irresponsible people will be social punishment so that they will be greatly deterred. To eliminate irresponsibility, we need to learn from developed countries like Japan so that things like
this
will never happen again. Of course, with the help of
AYFN
, the solution can be realized by contributing to
AYFN
as one of the communities or organizations that are useful for building networks around the world. The contribution I will make is to be committed to developing
AYFN
to be better known around the world, provide innovations related to future programs, have high enthusiasm in carrying out tasks, and behave positively to fellow members of
AYFN
or members who are already part of
AYFN
. I am very confident that I will get the opportunity to get a scholarship to Japan with the various organizational experiences and contributions that I will make. I hope I get
this
 opportunity. That's all from me, thank you and see you soon.
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