The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs describe
percentage
of families with three common electrical devices and Add an article
the percentage
number
of hours spent doing household chores during 99 Change the article
a number
the number
years
period.
As can be seen from the given line charts, all Fix the agreement mistake
year
the
three electrical appliances saw a significantly increased Correct article usage
apply
ownership
in the population and time used for housework show
a dramatical decrease.
It's noticeable that in 1920 most families did not Wrong verb form
showed
owner
a refrigerator, Replace the word
own
however
, washing
machine was the primary Add an article
the washing
a washing
ownership
of
Change preposition
apply
the
appliances in Correct article usage
apply
household
, which is about 40%. Add an article
the household
Further more
, vacuum Correct your spelling
Furthermore
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
is
Wrong verb form
were
also
correspondingly common in 1920, which is about 30%.
On the one hand, Although
washing
machine was the most common appliance in Correct article usage
the washing
Add an article
the household
a household
household
in 1920, it Fix the agreement mistake
households
keep
steady and after 1960 it became the least common appliance among all three devices. Wrong verb form
kept
On the other hand
, refrigerator
saw a most dramatic increase, it Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
becam
the highest Correct your spelling
became
ownership
around 1945, and almost reached 100% in 1980. And by
2000, Correct word choice
By
almsot
all the family Correct your spelling
almost
possess
vacuum Wrong verb form
possessed
cleaner
. With consistently increased Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
ownership
of appliance
, there is a visible fall in time used doing housework, it saw a dramatic decrease from 50 to 10 Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
hour
per week approximately in the given peFix the agreement mistake
hours
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