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Some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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In
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 contemporary era, in several countries, knowing the
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 of the properties has been interesting for the owners. In my opinion, various reasons are affecting
people
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 to think about the past times. I am
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 convinced that they can enquire about these buildings from different resources. It is my view that what absorbs
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 is the sense of connection. To put it in another way,
people
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 find it intriguing to be knowledgeable in possessing’
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 as they feel closer to that house.
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, not only does it enhance the connection with ancient
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 but
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 it enriches individuals’ curiosity.
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, numerous
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 have a personal interest in
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 and the
history
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 of their owners gives them an opportunity to fulfil
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 personal passion.
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, an ancient building in Kave Street was for one of the king’s ministers which resulted in a written book by its owner, owing to research and gaining information about that building and the past. I
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 believe that
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 can augment their knowledge by enquiring about the elderly of that neighbourhood and the municipality plays a substantial role as well.
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, some online websites can assist
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 in
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 field.
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, the public can search for the roots of constructed palaces and their reasons on different websites.
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people
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 should ensure that those sites are trustworthy, rarely does it happen that the government’s sites share wrong information.
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, augmenting the connection with possess and their personal interest brings about research about the
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 of that building. From my perspective, the public can enquire from the elderly and use the municipalities’ websites to raise their awareness about the property.

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