You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: describe the vacation spot you have chosen explain how you plan to spend your time there invite your friend to join you on your vacation.
Dear Ayda,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I'm just writing to inform you about the upcoming holiday and how I have planned for it.
It'll be a long holiday, I have decided to spend it on the beach, lying out beside the sea and having fun is the relaxing entertainment for my current situation. I've reserved a beach house with amazing facilities. It has two master bedrooms and an outdoor pool that will be a good place for releasing my high amount of stress.
There is a perfect place to try seafood and has lots of various restaurants so I have planned to have at least one meal per day outside. I heard about a historical place there recently , so I want to search about it and visit there too. It will be an amazing experience for me.
It would be great if you could join me, definitely, I'll provide all the accommodation for both of us.
I await your response as soon as possible due to
the reserving
the flight tickets.
Hope to see you Replace the word
reservation of
then
.
Ostore
Correct your spelling
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coherence cohesion
You should work on the logical structure of your letter. The flow of ideas could be improved by organizing your paragraphs better. For example, start with the description of the vacation spot, then explain how you plan to spend your time there, and finally invite your friend to join you.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should contain a single, clear idea. This would enhance the readability of your letter.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task, which shows a complete response.
task achievement
Your tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are well-suited for an informal letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,