Old people should do more exercise. Do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays,

although

doctors recommend that older people should get regular

exercise

, many older people do not

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enough

exercise

. At the same time,

however

, there is some uncertainty about the reasons for

this

situation, and how it might be resolved In

this

essay, I will examine the issue and seek some possible solutions There could be several causes for the phenomenon, one of which is that many old people still lack the awareness of exercising. To be more specific, few of them find it meaningful to do so since they don’t understand that there will be long-term

benefit

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to their health by doing

exercise

. Another compelling reason for insufficient

exercising

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is

that

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the lack of access

for

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mobility aids.

For example

, an elderly person who requires

wheelchair

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can hardly go

down stairs

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to do some

exercise

if there is no access

for

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mobility aids provided in his community. Considering

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the severity of

this

issue, effective measures should be taken by the authorities to grapple with the problem. One solution is that the authorities raise the elders’ awareness of the significance of exercising towards both mental and physical health by means

such

as spending leaflets and brochures. Apart from that, projects about access

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mobility aids should get started. In conclusion, the lack

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elder’s

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elder

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exercising

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has resulted in two undesirable outcomes.

However

, it can only be solved if governments take

actions

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.