The table below shows the changes in exports in HK billions between 2009 and 2010.

The table below shows the changes in exports in HK billions between 2009 and 2010.
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The given table depicts the differences in exports in Hong Kong from 2009 to 2010.
Overall
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, except for clothing and manufacturing, other exports had a
raise
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rise
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after a year. Equipment and telecommunications took the lead in 2009 and 2010 respectively,
while
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metal and manufacturing brought the least money. In 2009, equipment brought in 10.3
billion
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dollars, which increased by 1.3
billion
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in the next year. Telecommunication in 2009 got just less than 8
billion
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but jumped by 61% in 2010.
Despite metal
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Metal
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brought the least profit in 2009 with 2.3
billion
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dollars but had the biggest changes with 122%, twice more than the difference
of
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in
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telecommunication. Unlike the three exports, clothing and manufacturing both had a downward trend. Clothing suffered a 17% decrease from 6
billion
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to 5
billion
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dollars. Manufacturing received the worst slump with 27%
although
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the profit in 2010 was just half a
billion
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dollar
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less than a year prior.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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