You are applying for a Job and need a reference. Write a letter to the boss in your former Job. In your letter: •Give details of the job •Explain why it is important to you •Suggest what information your ex-boss could put in the reference.

Hello Sir, I hope you doing great. I am writing
this
letter to get a referral letter from your side as
i
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was working as
apart-time
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a part-time
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during my college.
However
, I recently
graduate
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from my college and I want to pursue my passion
into
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profession
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the profession
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by joining
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a company. During my final
exams
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our college arranged a seminar to present yourself in front of
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the CEO
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CEO
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of big companies.I
took
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participate
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in it where
i
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explain
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my presentation in front of guests. Fortunately, everything went well and all
guests
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were very impressed with my presentation.
Therefore
, the CEO of Heartrose company
offer
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me a job in his company, I
do
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not want to miss that opportunity
and
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I
accept
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it. Now
i
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just need a reference letter from your side
that
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about
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how
i
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did at your
work place
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and why should they hire me. That would be really appreciated for me. Sincerely, Thanks. Preet.
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