Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobsdescribe your new jobtell him/her your other news

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Dear Jack, I hope
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letter finds you well my dear friend, I'
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writing
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message to tell you that I left
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job
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ASD corporation and joined a new technological company called IBM,
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the two companies are in the same field, the challenges in the current firm are significant. I'
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gonna tell you more about my position now and what I anticipate to happen
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next few weeks. Now, I'
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the senior accountant of my department,
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, I have to prepare weekly reports about our sales and provide the marketing department
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, I'
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responsible for preparing all tax reports
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of each month,
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, forming some of
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financial risks that we should avoid is one of my tasks,
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, the task of dealing with overdue bills is the hardest part of my job. I'
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in
relationship
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now brother and I'
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going to marry soon, my girlfriend is from Jeddah and she is very happy to come and live with me here in my city. When I determine the day of my
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I will let you
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, please try to be here to celebrate with me. Just send me a message brother when you get free. with all love, Adam
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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