Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,
politiciants
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politicians
are believed that investing
on
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in
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railways
are
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is
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better than
roads
. Some
people
are claimed
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claim
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that
traveling
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travelling
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with
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by
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train is boring and lately. Other
people
believed
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believe
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that
railways
are cheaper, more effort and their cost of maintenance
are
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is
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much less than
roads
. Both views are discussed in order before
detailed
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a detailed
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conclusion. We use different types of ways
for
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of
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traveling
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travelling
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and each of them
have
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has
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some benefits and harms for us. One of the best ways for transport
are
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is
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railways
. But some
people
are said
railways
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always
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due to
moving in
straight
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a straight
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line always is boring.
Also
because we cannot cross cities, we miss the chance to see
a
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apply
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nature on special species.
Also
If
railways
were destroyed, it would be dangerous and
train
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trains
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might
be
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go out of
its
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their
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line. But it seems these
people
do not consider
problems
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the problems
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of
roads
. In our world, we face many problems and
dangerous
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dangers
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. One of which is
road
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the road
a road
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.
Government
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The government
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should spend more money
for
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on
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maintaining the
roads
.
On the other hand
,
railways
cost less than
roads
.
Furthermore
, in some
ways
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,ways
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trains are faster than
vechiles
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vehicles
because the
railways
are straight.
Also
, the equipment
of
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for
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maintenance for
roads
are
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is
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more expensive but quicker. In General, I
thinks
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think
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governments should spend more money to maintain and extend
railways
because it is more effort than
repair
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repairing
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the
roads
every month.
Also
traveling by train is much safer than vehicles.
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