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The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year.

#trend #education #move #exams #school #year
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Traditional
exams
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 have been decreased among certain demographics of countries. These people claim that tests lead to stress for
students
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 as
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 are preventable.
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, arising issues seem to continuously loom over these prospects, which will be discussed below and I will offer my view.
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 with, parents are always been wary of raising their children.
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, present day, the reduction of
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 at school is a beneficial trend for
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.
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 that,
students
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 are put under stress by parents for higher scores on an exam. It is evident that, in Sri Lanka, each year more than 10 per cent of
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 are committing suicide for low scores on
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 specifically at an advanced level by enthusiastic parents.
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,
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 put a pupil under stress and make them sick.
On the other hand
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, the
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 can not gain more
knowledge
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 from the continuous assessment rather than writing an exam.
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, a test is important for every student to improve their
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 in every grade. Indeed, there have been some records, that in a sophisticated world, everyone has a mobile phone,
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, they can not put an effort into assessment by themselves.
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,
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 is limited gradually.
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, continuous assessments are good for learning but they should do that by themselves.
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, despite the benefits of
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, the disadvantages of traditional
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 trump the advantages in a milestone. In my opinion,
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 are beneficial for gaining
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 ,
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, too much pressure puts a child's life in danger.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • current trend
  • traditional exams
  • continuous assessment
  • school year
  • deeper understanding
  • ongoing feedback
  • improvement
  • pressure
  • stress
  • real-life situations
  • continuous learning
  • evaluation
  • abilities
  • progress
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