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Student should be encouraged to work part-time. Do you agree or disagree?

#student #work
Everybody knows that
job
life
 is not only about earning money, it means learning everything and relationships with people, but
that is
also
 really the best teacher for them. Some adults want their kids to
work
 part-time others do not. I strongly believe that all
students
 should
work
,
that is
 some reason.
First,
education is not only in school learning everything, real
life
 is different from education, which is a big change for
students
 who
work
 part-time. they can earn money and experience in jobs and lives. because they join to reel
life
 by
work
's
life
.
For example
, I have a cousin and he is a doctor. He was a very successful student till his graduation from
university
,
then
 he joined Reel Lifelife and he was a social person and didn'
t
 talk to anybody and
finally
, he had been getting problems with psychology. If he was only a normal person maybe he wouldn'
t
 have the problems. Many universities and
schools
 want their
students
 to be interested. because
,
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 they know all
schools
 can give only information toric
however
work
life
 in reel
life
.
Students
 can get many experiences by living.
Second,
part-time
work
 is like a small film in
life
 for those who learn before joining
life
. they can check their
job
 in the future. If they don'
t
itlike
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like
it like
, they will have to change their
job
 before graduation.
For instance
, one of my friends who I know in
university
. He had an internship at the
university
 and he went. ,
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 he didn'
t
 like it when he began his internship. he understood the
job
 was not
according to
 him and he left for
university
. He is working another
job
 and he is happy with his
job
. I asked him sometime Do you regret leaving
university
?
However
, his answer was smiler every time; the internship was my chance for me to know how it works.
To sum up
,
students
 have to
work
 part-time
work
,
schools
 give us only lessons ,
however
,
work
 shows us real
life
 before our graduation. in my opinion. One day,
schools
 and workplaces will
work
 together so
students
 can learn better real
life
 and a toric
life
 of different.
Submitted by ares.grup on

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