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The images below illustrate the process and potential of how garbage can be recycled to create aviation biofuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustrations show how
biofuel
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 for aeroplanes is produced by recycling rubbish and the comparison of the amount of
garbage
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 made from it is possible production of
biofuel
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 in the United States.
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, there is a hugely positive contribution for the earth if petrol is replaced with
biofuel
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 for aeroplanes.
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, a wide range of
garbage
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 is picked up and sent to the place where the
biofuel
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 is actually processed and manufactured for aeroplanes,
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 the created
biofuel
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 must meet the special mechanical requirements of each airline company. If
biofuel
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 is widely used, greenhouse gas emissions would potentially be decreased maximum of 80%, and recycling
garbage
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 creates
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 clean, scalable, efficient and reliable energy. In terms of the second diagram, the total amount of
garbage
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 in the United States would produce 10 billion gallons of biomass oil, which is the triple amount of energy used by a primary airline company.
According to
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 the data, annually, more than 750kg of
garbage
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 is generated in the U.S., and it is highly expected to produce more than 25 gallons of clean energy out of annual trash. It is obvious that biomass oil has several benefits,
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, there is no mention of the cost of constructing plants and processing
biofuel
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. Those cost-effective perspectives need to be taken into account if it is going to be a realistic plan.
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, it is not a dramatic number, the total trash in one year in the U.S. creates just 10 gallons of biomass oil for only three aircraft.
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