The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The provided maps illustrate how the construction of an island has become which are designed with the intent of summer resort for tourists.
Overall
it is evident that all facilities are in the beach direction and the transformation after construction has completely achieved all summer resort attractions.
To begin
, there are two types of accommodation, the first one is overlooking the beach view and surrounded by the sea from the three sides, and the second type is in the middle of the island where it is next to a vast empty space involving palm trees which in turn can offer a quiet environment for tourists.
In addition
, it is noteworthy that the island is equipped with a footpath and vehicle track which play a vital role when visitors can readily roam around the facilities. Furthermore
, as per the map, the reception is directly in front of the pair, where tourists can easily check in once they arrive, They can also
do a cruise from the same place. In addition
, the restaurant is accessible to all residents while
it is located in between both accommodation areas.Submitted by alaan0542 on
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