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Many working people get little or no excercise either during tge workinf days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough excerise?

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The fact cannot be denied that nowadays so many employees do have not enough
time
 to keep themselves healthy. The main reason for
this
 issue should be their working hours
as well as
 their travelling
time
 for work, which we discuss in the
further
 paragraph.
According
to
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themto
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 , the root of
this
 complication is their work schedule
as well as
 their travelling
time
 which makes them exhausted to exercise and keep themselves healthy and fit. Another possible reason should is smartphones as so many people spend most of their
time
 on their digital gadgets for relaxation.
For instance
, they wake up early in the morning and start their day by scrolling down on their phones. Afterwards, go the work and come home late at night because of the pressure of job security and Money. So many people do not even get proper sleep,
according to
 a recent study in an American magazine.   To mitigate
this
 dilemma, the best possible solution is
getting
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 a job from home which is in trend nowadays.
while
 working from home not only eliminates transportation
time
 but
also
 gives them enough
time
 to go to the gym or other physical activities.
Moreover
, preparing a timetable
according to
 priorities the thing can
also
 be seen as a beneficiary.
Additionally
, they can join a gym and fitness centres.   In conclusion, I believe that people should assign their tasks with proper
time
 management to get rid of
this
 problem.
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