It is undeniable that nowadays second language is play big role and has become a essential part of education system.

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It is undeniable that nowadays second
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big
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role and has become
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system. Some experts assume that learning of foreign
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at primary school is better for children.
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, there is no absolute agreement as some people find it hard for students. Surely, there are both pros and cons to it but I believe
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outhweight
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of
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scientists
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brain will stressed out and train
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system, with which critical thinking will improve. A good example here is the grand masters of chess, 95
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of whom completely know two or more
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level.
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, nowadays all prestige universities around the world demand
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level of
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it is hard to
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developed universities. Turning to the other side of the argument, early learning of other
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national traditions, because the
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of the culture. In many countries
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the role of
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in assimilation. African states
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citizens lost
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one of the best samples of it. Implementation of new always can
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system. Having
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conclusion that early learning of
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language
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kind of risks, but in modern society for the future of student knowing different
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