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Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#people #habit #books #person
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successful people have reading
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habit
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habits
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.
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 the founder and owner of Microsoft, Bill Gates reads on average
one
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book
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 per week.
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 has led many to believe reading is a good
habit
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 to be cultivated
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 there is another group of people who think the type of
books
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one
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 reads play a key role too. In
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 we will look into both opinions. Reading brings a vast amount of benefits
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 to focus fully and
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deeper
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 understanding of a
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. Modern lives are
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 and many often multitask in order to be more efficient.
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, it gets challenging to get into deep thinking mode. Reading helps in
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 aspect as
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 to fully concentrate
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 the the paragraphs in order to understand fully. Compared to non-readers; readers are able to focus on tasks better and get their
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 straight.
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, reading allows
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 to grasp a
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 better as
books
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 provide comprehensive
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. A common way of obtaining information these days is to search
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the internet and watch videos related to the
topic
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. It is a convenient way;
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, it is as intensive as reading where the author transfers information into a few
hundred pages
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book
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.
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, it is undeniable that the type of
books
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one
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 reads
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 if reading is a healthy
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.
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,
comic
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a comic
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book
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that is
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 filled with
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 pictures and only short sentences is not helpful in building vocabulary or understanding of a
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. These
books
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 are mainly for the purpose of entertainment.
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, other genre
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 least helpful in improving
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’s knowledge
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 as Romance
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and scientific
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fiction
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 are recommended to be read on
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 basis only. Children who are
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 with these
books
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 often
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least
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interested
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 in their daily lives as they are deep into
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 world. In conclusion,
one
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 could form the
habit
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 of reading by starting with the types of
books
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 they enjoy reading. From there on
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explore
other type
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 of
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book
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books
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 that are truly beneficial in widening
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’s horizon and enriching lives.
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Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mental stimulation
  • knowledge acquisition
  • vocabulary expansion
  • stress reduction
  • memory improvement
  • analytical thinking
  • empathy
  • emotional intelligence
  • social cues
  • constructive content
  • morally uplifting
  • misinformation
  • harmful ideologies
  • critical reading skills
  • credible sources
  • inherently good habit
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