The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the number of Swiss
peoples'
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peoples
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birth
and
death
data, who were born between 1970 and 2020 based on United Nations statistics. The Units are measured by millions.
Overall
, the data highlighted the
birth
rate increased more than the
death
rate which inversely
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that the population of Switzerland increased within the period of 10 years. As can be seen in the chart, until 1990 the
birth
and
death
rates were balanced with values below 2 million. It is clear from the data that after
1990s
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there will be a sudden hike in the rate of
birth
touching values above 2.5 million.
On the other hand
, it is crystal clear that the
death
rates are gradually decreasing after 1990 reaching values below 1.5 million. During the period of
2000
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,2000
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there has been a huge difference in
birth
and
death
rates
according to
the statistics.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, death with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • death rate
  • fluctuation
  • demographic
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • incremental
  • statistical
  • longitudinal
  • population growth
  • life expectancy
  • fertility rate
  • mortality rate
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
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