Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Due to

the modern society, everything develops day by day in

both

good and bad directions. The more developed the society is, the more social evils are. That’s why people find it very hard to avoid the bad things like that

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because it looks like very attractive and charming. Especially, for youngsters, it is difficult for them not to be immersed in

this

,

such

as becoming addicted to playing games or smoking or their rhythms daily time will not in moderation and many things. All of those are called an unhealthy

lifestyle

.

Hence

, I entirely agree with

this

statement,

both

of them must have a responsibility for

this

phenomenon. Through the internet, we can acknowledge that children are very easy to be appealed by many entertainments and they cannot refuse them. After that, they will not concentrate on working or studying and

this

makes them become a burden to society. Because of an unhealthy

lifestyle

,

such

as sleeping over, staying up late or not spending time for themselves or anything like that, these evil socials can make them neglect themselves. In

this

context,

both

schools and parents should take care of them carefully. In school, teachers must emphasise the side effects of an imbalanced

lifestyle

if they excessively consumption of fast food,

then

they will become obese and have many harmful effects influence on their bodies.

Besides

that, parents should set a good example for children and they will imitate

this

lifestyle

. Every family

also

do exercise together by walking or riding a bike, it can help them become not only strong but

also

happy. In conclusion, every individual must create a healthy

lifestyle

for each other because if they have a balanced

lifestyle

, their lives will be better than before

both

in health and mental.