The internet has a bigger impact on people’s lives because it is more popular than television.

Nowadays,

people

use the

Internet

a lot more than

television

and the

Internet

has an

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enormous effect on them. In my point of view, I agree with the mentioned opinion that Social networks and news on the

Internet

. On the one hand, the

internet

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is more diverse and convenient than

television

. Watching movies, blogs and other entertainment media on the

internet

is more accessible than

TV

, because it can be viewed anywhere, anytime.

For example

, a lot of

people

like to watch programs on

tv

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.

However

, the schedule is not suitable for them because of their work.

In contrast

,

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Internet

they can watch the program they want after work or

any

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other convenient time.

Secondly

, the

Internet

provides a variety of content,

while

television

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are less diverse.

Therefore

,

people

watch less

TV

nowadays.

For example

,

according to

VTV24, young

people

in Vietnam spend about 10 hours on the

internet

every day. As far as I considered, the

internet

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is more diverse and convenient than

television

.

On the other hand

, the

internet

helps us connect with

people

from all over the world. It is very easy to text and make new friends just by using media platforms

such

as Ometv or

lit

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match

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.

For example

, I myself often use the Ometv application to communicate and make friends with foreigners.

In contrast

, by watching

on

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TV

I can not make more friends because there is no online connection.

Therefore

, the

internet

helps us connect with

people

from all over the world that

television

can not provide. In conclusion,the

internet

is more diverse and convenient than

television

and

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social

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network. In my opinion, I agree that we can learn a lot of new things through the

internet

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and it

also

helps to update ourselves

each

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now and

then

.