The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Information about the sources of revenue and
expences
of a US charity in US dollars for one year is presented by two pie charts.
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expenses
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