The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Information about the sources of revenue and
expences
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of a US charity in US dollars for one year is presented by two pie charts.
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, the institution spent over fifty-three million and two hundred twenty thousand dollars, which is slightly less
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a
quater
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quarter
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a milliion
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milliion
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million
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than what they
recieved
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received
. Most
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noticeable
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is the fact that close to 96% of the money went to program services. The other two - fundraisings and management, which
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make slightly more than 5% of the expenditures. Donated food was the biggest
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of revenue taking up more than 86% of it. Far more than the following one with around ten per cent - community contributions. Program Revenue contributed to
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2%. The rest of the sources together combine to less than
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one per cent.
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