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Experts claim that if older people do more exercise they will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly people suffer from a lack of fitness. What are the causes of this and what are some possible solutions?

#experts #people #exercise #lack #fitness
Most
of
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elder
people
 are not used to
workout
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working
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 and
feel
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find it
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 difficult to move since they
found
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have
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 health problems
on
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in
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 their
body
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bodies
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. For them, it is hard to find a good
excercise
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exercise
 in their circumstances which is lack of time because of
a
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the
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 distance from office to home. In Korea, some elder
people
 still need to work so that they make a living themselves. And some have
phisical
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physical
 issues so that they
feel
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find it
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 hard to
workout
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work out
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.
Therefore
, to start small
excercise
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exercise
 in their situation is better to get used to
workingout
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working out
to
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with
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 elder
people
.
First,
walking
nearby
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near
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 their place and stretching at home
is
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are
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one
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some
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of
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good
excercises
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exercises
 for the first step. It is easy
to begin
, except
those
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for those
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 who have
problem
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a problem
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on
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with
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elbow
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the elbow
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 or knee.
These working
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Working
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 out makes
people
sense
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feel
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 uncomfortable feeling on the elbow and the knee with heat.
Second,
For those who have pain
on
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in
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elbow
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their elbow
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 or knee problem, it is better to
do
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go
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 swimming.
Swimming
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 pool is
also
 used for
rehability
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reachability
reliability
readability
to
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for
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 patients who
had
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have
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phisical
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physical
problem
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problems
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. Interestingly, most
of
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people
feel
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find it
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 easier to move
thier
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their
body
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bodies
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 in water than
moving
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to move
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 out of water. In conclusion, It is important that
people
workout
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work out
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 for
their
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a
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 healthy life even though it is small
exercises
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exercise
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. If they start
workingout
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working out
, they get more and more healthier than before.
Human
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The human
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body
 is not like
machine
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a machine
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. The more
people
 use
thier
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their
body
, the more healthier
people
 can be.
when
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 one
use
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uses
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muscle
 and the
muscle
 gets hurt,
muscle
 will recover and get bigger than before.
Muscle
 gets
people
 strength and endurance to make balance in their routine.
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