The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zeland between 1901 and 2101

The provided line graph illustrated information about variations in the

birth

and

death

rates

in New

Zeland

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from 1901 to 2101.

Overall

, the

death

rates

stood a

steady

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rising trend during the given time, whilst the

birth

rates

witnessd

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witnessed

a fluctuated period between 1901 and 2101.

According to

the data shown in the diagram, the

birth

rates

skyrocketed at

sixty five

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thousands

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in 1961 and decreased sharply from 1970 to 1981. After uplifting

around

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a decade, they kept falling

during

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1991 to 2021 and

had

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experienced another

increasing

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for ten years till 2011.

However

, the prediction of the dropping

rates

will remain

nearly

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70 years until 2101.

By contrast

, the

death

rates

had a considerable growth over the period, which were anticipated to exceed the

birth

rates

after 2041 and will hold

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upward until 2101, even reaching approximately sixty

thousands

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. As was demonstrated in the line graph, it can be apparently seen the

death

rates

were expected to overtake the

birth

rates

in New

Zeland

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Zealand

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in 2041

although

they were at lower sites in the previous 140 years.