The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph depicts the highest spending on transportation in ten different countries in 2014. The chart shows that the country of China has spent the most money on travelling approximately 112 lots dough;
whereas
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Taiwan is the society that has spent the
last
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budget on commuting about 10 tons
dollars
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.
While
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the United States and Germany both spend the same capital nearly 85 lots
dollars
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and have acquired the second rank on the chart, The United Kingdom has spent almost 55 billion
dollars
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and is the fourth in ranking on travelling.
On the other hand
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, South Korea and Hong Kong have both expenditure 20 billion
dollars
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on journeys which have spent 5 tons
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less than Singapore.
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, India and Malaysia have spent 12 and 15 billion
dollars
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on trips respectively. As shown on the graph the top fourth countries
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as China, the United States, Germany and the United Kingdom have expensed deposit more than other communities on travelling
while
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the other countries have spent less percentage of capital on the journey.
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