The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given illustration provides information about the life circuit of a big fish known as salmon.
Overall
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this
process consists of three stages, beginning with the Linking Words
eggs
of salmon under reeds and ending up with swimming in the ocean.
First of all, full-grown fishes lay their Use synonyms
eggs
under the plant called reeds covered with stones to protect Use synonyms
eggs
from predators in the river. After that, the Use synonyms
eggs
turned into fries size 3-8 Use synonyms
centimeters
. Change the spelling
centimetres
Next,
they move into the lower river where have a fast-flowing adopting themselves harsh environment of the open seas for approximately 4 years. In Linking Words
this
second stage, the length of salmon reaches between 12 to 15 Linking Words
centimeters
.
Change the spelling
centimetres
Following
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this
, they continue their lives in the giant sea since they become strong enough to survive and spend nearly 5 years in the depths of the open seas. Their growth keeps going and they evolve into 70-76 cm great fishes. Linking Words
Finally
, they return to the upper river to reproduce. A couple of them lay Linking Words
eggs
under the plant and make sure the new life circle of salmons.Use synonyms
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