The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given illustration provides information about the life circuit of a big fish known as salmon.
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process consists of three stages, beginning with the
eggs
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of salmon under reeds and ending up with swimming in the ocean. First of all, full-grown fishes lay their
eggs
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under the plant called reeds covered with stones to protect
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from predators in the river. After that, the
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turned into fries size 3-8
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they move into the lower river where have a fast-flowing adopting themselves harsh environment of the open seas for approximately 4 years. In
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second stage, the length of salmon reaches between 12 to 15
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, they continue their lives in the giant sea since they become strong enough to survive and spend nearly 5 years in the depths of the open seas. Their growth keeps going and they evolve into 70-76 cm great fishes.
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, they return to the upper river to reproduce. A couple of them lay
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under the plant and make sure the new life circle of salmons.
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