A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •give contact details for when you are away •give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

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Dear Petra, Thank you for accepting my offer to stay my home

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I am on holiday. I am going to stay at the Hilton Barcelona for a week. My mobile is always with me. You may reach me whenever you need. I have posted my dog’s vet clinic phone number on a sticky note which is on the mirror in my room. My dog needs a daily walk in the afternoon. You can find my dog’s food in the kitchen pantry. His food dish and water bowl need to be filled twice a day. He is very keen on playing in the garden with his ball.

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, my flowers in the garden need water in the mornings. Could you clean my mailbox for security reasons?

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, please turn on the front door light in the evening. I hope everything is going well and you may feel comfortable at my home. I am looking forward to seeing you soon, All the best, Jane

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

163 words

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