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International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do advantages outhweigh the disadvantages?

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The
economy
 of a
country
 is associated with different industries and fields. There are different types of industries
such
 as automotive, science, engineering, and
last
, but not least, tourism. We can traduce tourism as international travel which has two perceptions, either negative aspects; like
advantages
 or negative aspects; like
disadvantages
. We have to bear in mind that the previously mentioned, will impact directly proportional to the
country
 and travellers. On the one hand. There are
people
 who think that international travel has many
advantages
.
According to
 the
Economy
 magazine, the major flow of the
economy
 of a
country
 is
due to
 the flow of travellers.
Thus
, in terms of benefits, the countries receive more visitors which results in more sales, and more foreign investment. Travellers will have benefits and positive
impacts
 on their lives. Travelling is a treasure for the soul,
people
 will meet different places, learn different idioms, and interact with a new culture. On top of that. When
people
 are travelling across the world, they are gaining experiences and memories for their whole life.
On the other hand
, there are certain
people
 who believe that international travel carries native
impacts
. The
disadvantages
 that could impact strongly on a nation are the kind of
people
 that are entering the
country
.
For instance
, the quality and professional background of
people
 really matters, because, if the visitors do not have a degree or master's of science, those will generate negative
impacts
 on the culture of the
country
.
Thus
, keeping the rules and the culture will be really difficult. In conclusion, there are more
advantages
 than
disadvantages
. One of the most important positive
impacts
 is the increase in sales that a
country
 could have
due to
 the number of visitors. As we know, there are several benefits for a
country
, and the
country
 must keep the
economy
 level up,
Therefore
, the
advantages
 outweigh the
disadvantages
.
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