The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of age ranges of
people
who live in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050. These ages divided
into 3 sections.
From a cursory glance, it is readily apparent that Yemen’s youngest age group was the highest percentage in 2000, Add a missing verb
are divided
however
, the number of middle aged
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middle-aged
people
showed a rise. On the other hand
, the people
who are between 15 and 59 year
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years
olds
had the Correct your spelling
old
greates
rates at the Correct your spelling
greatest
great
begining
in Italy. Correct your spelling
beginning
Whereas
, it showed a decline and the oldest age group displayed big
change.
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Firstly
, in Yemen, young
and Add an article
the young
middle aged
population had almost the same percentages at the beginning. Kids who Add a hyphen
middle-aged
under
14 years old were more than half and adults were less than 50% in 2000. These numbers will change and adults reach almost 57.3%. Meanwhile, elderly Add a missing verb
were under
people
who older
than 60 Add a missing verb
are older
year
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years
olds
showed a minimal decrease.
In Italy, Correct your spelling
old
mid-aged
women and men were more than 60% in 2000. Correct your spelling
middle-aged
Whereas
, this
will reduce by almost 20%. At the same time, the percentages
of old folks will jump from 24.1% to 42.3%. At the same instant, the youngest humanity’s proportion will go down.Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
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