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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Music
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 is one of the seven arts which is well-known among all nations and different countries house different kinds of
music
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. To some extent, it seems that
music
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 can attract
people
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 of different
cultures
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 and ages and join them together. I think that
people
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 all around the world and even from different generations can communicate with each other through
music
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 better. In my view, as
music
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 involves words from a specific language, it can be a good
way
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 to communicate with
people
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 from other
cultures
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.
People
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 usually are interested in knowing about different
cultures
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 and they find it interesting to Listen to
music
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 which is related to a culture
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 as local
music
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. In
this
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way
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, they can be even more friendly with each other. Another reason that I agree with the magic of
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 for bringing
people
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 of different ages together is that as some
music
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 describes the events that have taken place in a specific time,
people
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 from different generations can be familiar with these events. Nowadays we may even see that many adults who are really interested in ancient and old
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 as their elderly are. In
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way
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, I think they can understand their parents or other old
people
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's thoughts and feelings better. The
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 reason that I believe in the power of
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 is that, sometimes the lyric of
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 is based on what is happening in a society and it
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 describes many problems related to a country. So in
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way
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,
people
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 can share more sympathy and are able to understand each other better.
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, I believe in the magic and power of
music
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 for making
people
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 from different
cultures
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 and ages closer as it can form and show our thoughts and feelings better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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