INVITATION LETTER TOPIC . You are planning to go to a music concert in your town and would like a friend to accompany you. Write a letter to invite your friend to the concert you are planning to go to. In your letter, say: what the content of the music concert is where and when the music concert is why you think your friend should go to this concert You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Javier,
I hope
this
letter finds you well and in good spirits. I am writing to invite you to a music
festival which is going to be held in Muynak and I would be honoured if you would be able to join me on this
day.
I am sure you already know about the event named Element 2024 which is being organized in Muynak to revive this
region with the help of the music
show. Moreover
, it will be an open-air concert where Detroit techno classics, Georgian ghetto bass, and brisk rhythms from Egypt will be played by famous musicians all
over the world.
Meanwhile, the show is organized to be held on June 5th at 6:00 p.m. in the western part of Muynak on the shore of the once full-flowing Aral Sea which is well-known as Ship Graveyard.
Since you are a connoisseur of extraordinary Change preposition
from all
music
I am sure you will thoroughly enjoy yourself. Therefore
, If you are free and interested, please let me know as soon as possible to book our tickets beforehand.
I am looking forward to enjoying this
music
concert with you.
Best regards,
Bryan Wagner.Submitted by saint_4ever on
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Task Achievement
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Coherence and Cohesion
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