Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no denying the fact that
choices
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are
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were
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available in the past and nowadays,
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it is a commonly held belief that in recent years there are more options than in the past. There is
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an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that
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nowadays there are
lot
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a lot
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of
choices
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to take more than
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in previously
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previously
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previous
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centuries.
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with,
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these days governments and companies offer many jobs or chances to be what you want to be in your future,
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before that they gave you a chance to work
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for
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your-self
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yourself
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in
child
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childhood
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and adulthood
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also
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and also
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discovred
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discovered
your dreams.
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, after
their
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they
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graduate from secondary school, they
could planned
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can plan
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if they want to study in college or not,
this
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point
make
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makes
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lot
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a lot
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of different
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different
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difference
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in
life's
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life
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person
,.
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In
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addition
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people
are having
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have
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a
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the
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freedom to choose where they want to live.
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, if they want to live with their
familes
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families
or alone
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might depend
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many situations. Another point to consider, in ancient ages people
work
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worked
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in
same
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the same
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jobs
their
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as their
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fathers
do
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did
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, but now it is different, if you have dreams or
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desires
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you
could
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can
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wish
it
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them
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and do
it
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them
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. It is
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possible to say that, because
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poverty in
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the older
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generation they cannot leave their households if they do will
died
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because they have farms and animals to take care of
it
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apply
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.
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, some countries restricted their rules which means a limit of freedom and
choices
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.
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,
Saudies
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Saudi
women
cannot
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could not
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drive cars in past. In conclusion despite people having different views, I believe that the world
change
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most time and will give you more and more
choices
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in future which is
gift
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a gift
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from god.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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