MANY PEOPLE FIND IT DIFFICULT TO LIVE A HEALTHY LIFE. WHAT ARE THE DIFFICULTIES THEY FACE? WHAT CAN THESE PEOPLE DO TO BECOME HEALTHIER?

In recent years, more

people

have difficulties

to be

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healthier in the cutting-edge.

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essay will discuss

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the obstacles

people

face and recommend some solutions in order to live a healthy life. The two main problems of

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the struggle

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to stay healthy are

busy

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lifestyle and

environment

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pollution

. Nowadays, a fast-paced lifestyle

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people

tend to eat fast food which contains high fat, sugar and low nutrition leading

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the

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increase

of

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the

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obesity and heart diseases in society. These are

also

caused by the

limit

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time to do exercise for a hustle day. A

further

issue is

that

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the

environment

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environmental

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pollution

caused by

fast

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development of

industry

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the industry

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. The waste and the gas from vehicles

as well as

the firm lead to

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air

pollution

, which

cause

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lung disease and cancer.

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, to be faced with these challenges, the population can begin

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adopting better time management

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and government

protect

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environment

projects. Individuals may prepare

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at home and get up early to

do

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exercise before going to work or school. There are many groups to

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people

more

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motivation

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in getting

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a healthy lifestyle. An

addition

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solution is that the government should organize projects which protect the

environment

. By reducing the price of public transportation

such

as

bus

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buses

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or

train

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trains

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in local

area

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areas

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in order to increase

a

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number of passengers

in stead

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of using individual mean.

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law aims to punish companies

which their

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waste is expelled into the

environment

for citizens in order not to live in a fresh air life. In conclusion, busyness and

pollution

are significant issues that prevent

people

form

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from

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staying

heathy

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healthy

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.

However

,

people

can practice

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to manage

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their time to take part in government environmental projects to protect their health.