A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the musuem • Describe some skill and qualities you have the would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

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letter to apply for the part-time position available in the museum. I am aware of the fact that it will be an unpaid position. I am willing to do volunteer

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because being a student of Arts will help me to gain more knowledge about history, in, addition will provide me with the experience of working for a company. Since my childhood, I visited

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place several times, which is why I have a lot of knowledge about various artist and their

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projected to the customer.

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, as mentioned in the job description,

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position requires a person who is organized, a proficient public speaker, and can

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independently, I believe that I can be a perfect fit. Currently, I am on college vacation so for the next two months I can

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full-time,

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only on weekends. I look forward to hearing from you. Your's faithfully Akankasha

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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voluntary work
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