Some People claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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According to
this
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much
waste
from homes is not already recycled, they say that the only method to increase recycling is for governments to make it a law
, a rule
, a legal requirement
. So on
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this
suggestion not
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makes
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a rule
government
make it a rule
, people
will become uncomfortable, angry and day by day all of them will not obey to the rule
. So I think that government
not
need to make a legal Change the verb form
does not
did not
requirement
they only need to usually encourage, help
everybody to become comfortable and happy to recycle their Correct word choice
and help
waste
because there are many factors make
the Correct pronoun usage
that make
waste
from home become higher so government
can manage all of them, only every Add an article
the government
individuals
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government
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law
to make them have to recycle their waste
. For instance
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has
waste
. If they think to the government
and the encourage
of the Replace the word
encouragement
government
, they will become more happy to recycle to protect habitat for everyone but if this
is a law
, a legal requirement
they will feel uncomfortable and have some negative activities. This
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apply
all
, I think, Correct determiner usage
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people
don’t need a law
or a legal requirement
, they only need an encourage everybody, government
to recycle their Correct article usage
the government
waste
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. But if some Add an article
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people
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government
.
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the government
offer
all Verb problem
encourage
people
to recycle their waste
but not already need a rule
, a law
to make people
to
obey to recycle, Change the verb form
apply
the
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The
government
only need some encourage
for everyone, Replace the word
encouragement
recycle
Fix the infinitive
to recycle
waste
, protect
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and protect
environment
together.Add an article
the environment
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