In many countries paying for things using mobile phone app is becoming increasing common, Does this development have more advantages and disadvantages?

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Nowadays, Technology is improved.
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, millions of people choose
phone
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apps
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the payments in spite of the bank. In my opinion, Operating the system can achieve more advantages.
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will discuss, how to convenient and how to protect the money. On the one hand, in today’s
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worlds
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people live a busy life.
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, as, usual they are doing everything by finger trips.
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, past era if somebody wanted to pay some education fees, they had to go to
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school. Unfortunately, most of the parents are working
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.
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, there isn’t time to go to the
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to make payments.
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, at
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moment,
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introduced some applications for making
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payments
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by
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everyone
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so everyone
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to pay on time. Because of that, above
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mentioned,
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is
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one of
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fact.
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, our money is protected from robs.
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, in the past folk handled
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applications
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for
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payments
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in a blue moon,
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therefore
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in therefore
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past era everyone had money in hand.
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a result, all over the world faced robs problems.
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, nowadays, most communities need
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application
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applications
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to make
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.
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, using mobile
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is becoming more popular;
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people’s life risk is reduced,
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that
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is another advantage of
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phone
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apps
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.
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, in my point of view, People who use mobile
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to pay
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have more advantages rather than disadvantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contactless transactions
  • Mobile wallet
  • Biometric authentication
  • Fraud prevention
  • Digital divide
  • Cybersecurity
  • Financial inclusion
  • Spending habits
  • E-wallet
  • Encryption
  • Digital literacy
  • Payment gateway
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