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As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that drivers should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In recent years, raising the amount of cars led the
government
 to allocate a budget to the
road
 systems.
The
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 opinions occurred about whether the
government
 should spend on
this
 infrastructure as
the
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it the
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 fundamental
of
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 our lives or the car owners should pay for
this
 system as they always use it. In my opinion, the
government
 should spend on the
road
 network because we all use it directly and indirectly. There are several reasons why the
government
 should subsidize their budget for the
roads
.
Firstly
,
roads
 are basic fundamental infrastructure in the
country
.
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road
 network is one of the key factors
to improve
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in improving
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 the economy
in
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 the
country
 .
Moreover
, everyone uses the
road
 and public transportation
such
 as buses to commute to their destination.
Therefore
, it is obviously seen that the
road
 system will benefit everyone in the
country
 as it can facilitate basic transportation and generate revenue
to
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 the
country
.
However
, some people argue that the drivers or the car owners spend money on the
road
 system on their own because it provides the most benefit to them. The car owners use the
road
 for their transportation more than the people who don't have their own cars.
Furthermore
, they are one of a group of people who caused damage to the
road
. Some of the drivers illegitimate the rule of driving,
for example
, carrying more weight than the law imposed. In conclusion, I believe that the
government
 should provide the budget
to
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 the
roads
 as the
roads
 are the infrastructure which benefits everyone in the
country
.
However
, the state should set the punishment or the fine for the drivers who break the rule which caused ruin to the
roads
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equitable access
  • public service
  • comprehensive planning
  • financial burden
  • user-pay principle
  • traffic congestion
  • encourage sustainable transportation
  • fair distribution of costs
  • direct benefit
  • road taxes
  • tolls
  • revenue
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